tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6968104143619368898.post5192516312655965383..comments2012-11-11T19:13:15.109-06:00Comments on Maegan Torres's EDM310 Class Blog: Blog Post 3Maegan Torreshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05408147682344479419noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6968104143619368898.post-13615448075994821972012-09-25T00:13:02.510-05:002012-09-25T00:13:02.510-05:00Well done! Your post is well written and to the p...Well done! Your post is well written and to the point. The only errors I saw were small gramatical ones. The section "If the person would like to continue on with the conversation, moving to e-mail would benefit in that sense" might be better if it used "would be a benefit" instead. Also the portion "as well as stay focused" might be expanded to say "as well as keep them focused". Other that that, well done!SErdmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03192401799824456489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6968104143619368898.post-30671206254063157452012-09-23T18:35:38.572-05:002012-09-23T18:35:38.572-05:00I enjoyed your post. I think it is amazing that yo...I enjoyed your post. I think it is amazing that your concentration in education is History and by your post I can see clearly that it fits you. Your post was well written with only a few errors such as missing commas. Another suggestion, that will only benefit your next post, is try not using "and" twice in a sentence, make another sentence this will help the flow of things.Keely Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00726329843915851911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6968104143619368898.post-47955808648927418442012-09-21T09:14:25.696-05:002012-09-21T09:14:25.696-05:00Interesting. Well written. Well done.Interesting. Well written. Well done.John Hadley Strangehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17484977903995419205noreply@blogger.com